peer review of I am

I'M reveiwing Michelle Piedade's blog. She's 13 years old loves to play vollyball,baseball and likes shops all the time. I'M Portause American and born in New York. She live in Astoria, Queens. She loves to cook,bake and hangout with her friends(as I always know).She went to Our Lady Of Mt.Carmel until first grade.Then got tranfured to I maculated conseption until third grade.Then went to P.S.122 until graduation,then went to I.S141Q.PHEW!! She a kind person like me.She likes to Dance,go to parties and chic-chat with her friends. The way she did with her asignment vwas great but goofy.